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Forever Hungry

Errors in judgement
The lessons you learn
Mistakes are the matches
That make money burn

Such a fine line
Made clearer in time
Danger ever present
But not as present as your mind

Fly in a web
Spiders crowding round
Chequered is the tightrope
Of the web that is wound

Its a path to paradise
As freedom you grasp
Hunger now engulfs them
The spell forever cast

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On Saturday January 29th, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:

ooohh i LOVE this...great write.

On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

again its the last stanza that really gets me you are talented

On Friday December 24th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

matches, webs, and paradise? im sold... :P

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

Wow, you are too good to be true...no bad writes at all....

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

This was very good. I don't like that you have written a poem that I don't like.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, blue (1749) writes:

...wonderful description of greed and it's expense! ~b

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

that was great.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

i'm a newbie, too....i love your flow, it is rhythmic...i enjoy your style.

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