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Red roads of lightning
Burning trees felled
In the palm of a hand
A circle is held
Forever spinning round
A hidden strange world
Land sea and pupil
Together in a swirl
Eyeball is the shell
And iris the pearl


Copyright 2004 island warrior

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On Friday September 15th, 2006, Thorn (434) writes:
I like. The surrealism shows restraint and keeps the imagery fairly neat. But I don't need to tell you all that. Again, I really like it.


On Monday November 21st, 2005, Michelle Xiao (482) writes:
It is delicious in illustration. An original concept and shaped so intricately. Something only excavated by care and thoughtfulness.


On Friday June 17th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:
Short yet full of meaning. Amazing.


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:
they say what I want to say... so yeah, what they said... *Raven*


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:
wow...you have an amazing way with words great write. ~Siren~


On Friday February 4th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
beautiful imagery...a masterpiece of brilliance. another wonderful write.


On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
a brilliant image - perfect in its length, and descriptive enough to leave behind an impression. Lovely. Thank you.


On Friday December 24th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:
ive been left with the most awsome imagery... youve done this one way beyond well.. simply amazing.


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:
wow


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
Well said in such a short poem. This is a good example of the phaze "short and sweet"


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
incredibly creative...how you managed to make such a vivid picture like this rhyme.....pure talent. -zay


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, frozen (741) writes:
very lovely write


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
this piece is lovely--it reads like an invocation or meditation--nicely done


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
This is exceptional work . . the whole piece is absolute brilliance. Each line is magnificent . . a beautiful, masterful write ~ Rose


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, blue (1756) writes:
I concur. Brilliant write; Cosmic imagination! ~brian



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