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"The accident that Alyssa and I were in" by Elise

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Sunday, me and Alyssa were headed to pick up a friend and their baby boy (Ryan, who will be 2 in August and sooo cute). Along the way we were hit by some guy in a pickup truck who was speeding and flew past his stop sign. He nailed my car spinning it completely around. Alyssa cried, people came out of their homes and got her out of the car. Some lady had my baby and held her where I could see her clearly. I couldn't move to get out. The ambulance drivers pulled me onto a board and put me on a stretcher immediately putting a neckbrace on me (I hate this thing). They all told me Alyssa was fine, she's ok etc, trying to keep me calm. I was completely strapped down but still tried to look and see Alyssa who was saying "beep beep" to the sound of the siren. They quickly splinted my right arm because it was horribly disfigured. I was lucky to be wearing my seatbelt, although it turned just about my entire stomach purple, it stopped me from flying thrugh the windshield.I suffered no broken bones, which shocked the hell out of the doctors. I have deep bruising evrywhere. The hardest part is I can't pickup and console my daughter, who always went to me when hurt or not feeling well. Heartbreaking. All because someone had been drinking and driving. He and his passenger were hurt badly, suffering broken bones. He had been drinkig and left the house pissed off. You could hear them talking because they were only a curtain and a few feet away. The driver's wife works for the Sheriff department, and there was a policy number, but no insurance company name. Interesting coincidence? Thats fine, I talk to a lawyer tomorrow. My baby is prolly terrified of riding in a car, when thats what she loved a lot. She would want me to put her shoes on her then pick her up then she would tell everyone "bye bye" and wanna go for a ride. Now she knows she was in a car then she ended up hurt. A fractured collarbone, it keeps her from using her arm very often. That person should lose his liscense and spend a little jail time. He goes to jail if they find his blood alcohol level is high enough. We wont know for 6 weeks.



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On Thursday August 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
*hugs* I'm so glad you and Alyssa are ok. I wish there was something I could do that would make it less traumatic *hugs & kisses*


On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Nesfurata (67) writes:
Wow, that is just horrible. I wish there was something any of us could do to help. Anyway, take care, and I hope all goes well and that he gets in some serious trouble.


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:
Elise! i don't think i can express how relieved i am that you two are ok. it's good to have you back as well. ::hugs:: hope you recover quickly as well -Jesse


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Markus Porkwing (709) writes:
that sucks balls. I am glad you and baby are ok.


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Rachel (392) writes:
A good friend of mine was killed by a drunk driver roughly 2 weeks ago. I'm glad to hear you two made it out okay. I definitely know how you feel, though. *hugs* I love you, Lise.


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Elise (264) writes:
I'm so sorry Rachel, if you ever need me I'll be there. I love you too *hugs*


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Elise (264) writes:
I'm worried, although this wasn't my fault. The man who hit us could die. He got hurt pretty badly. His family now have a lawyer.


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, DoctorAsh (505) writes:
Damn elise.. a scary story indeed, I was waiting for that tragic line to appear, but luckly it never did, and I'm glad everyone is alive. You are strong .. Much repect. Daniel


On Friday June 17th, 2005, Solace (1425) writes:
Thats disgusting...he should be incarcerated indefinately...there is no excuse but a lack of willpower and that in itself should = prison for a lengthy stay


On Friday June 17th, 2005, Daemonicus (638) writes:
awww =( *big hugs for elise and alyssa* as i was reading all i wanted to hear is you'll both be ok... *so* glad you both are at least not physically damaged beyond repair.. only hugs can fix the rest *hug*


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
i, too, am glad they took Alyssa out and kept her in your sight, that was a kind thing to do, and im glad they were so nice, n glad ya'll are OK -Kel


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Elise (264) writes:
I'm glad too, I wanna know who this woman was and how I could ever thank her.


On Friday June 17th, 2005, Daemonicus (638) writes:
yeah. that was a really thoughtful thing to do. perhaps she was a mother herself.


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
thank god you guys are alive and OK, for the most part! im so sorry -Kel


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
so happy you are alive.


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Serenity (595) writes:
God I am so happy you two are alright. And I'm honestly glad that they took Alyssa out of the car and stood infront of you so you can see her.



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