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Heart beating,
body all tense,
eyes close together and sharp as a hawk.
Nerves shot,
hands twitching,
mind focused on one thing.
Temperature rising,
blood boiling,
smiles fade fast form the joyful occasion.
Life of jealousy,
life of revenge,
life full of remorse that shouldn't even be there.
The emotions build,
the emotions consume,
the emotions take over and the transformation begins.
Out of hope,
out of control,
out of mind, body, and soul.
Giving up,
giving no thought,
giving into the fighting temptation building inside.
That same feeling,
that same lust,
that same desire to seek out and conquer.
all this tied up inside and still sayin' aloud...
Feelin' fine.

May 12, 2004

"Feeling bad or feeling good... I leave it up to you"




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On Thursday July 21st, 2005, blue (1749) writes:
o.O this whole piece gained speed as I read it.. thought provoking to be sure. ~b


On Monday November 29th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
Oh I have felt this way so many times. VERY well expressed. I love it! Excellent write.


On Monday November 29th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
The title made me think of that song from Bugsy Malone..'I'm feelin' fine,filled with emotions..stronger than wine...'la da da da...nice write :)


On Monday November 29th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:
well written



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