Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"It lingers" by VenomPlease

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


I love you
like the day is long
And the days around here
are pretty fucking long and restless
And they are
hot and humid
You can swim through the moisture in the air

And my if pain was a particle of condensation resting on
your skin then I would make rain
I would make floods that put the oceans to shame
And if my shame could be adequately transformed to words
I'd be a Shakespearian masterpiece

But I am an inanimate object masquerading as a girl
As a living thing that feels and breaths
And loves like the day is long
Feels shame that is thicker than blood
Blood that does not coarse through veins
But kept flowing by you at a deathfully slow rate

And this thing...
This thing that lingers over me
It never goes away
And it's for you



Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Friday September 30th, 2005, cyan9 (7) writes:
Very delicate to read - however I dont think the swearing in the first verse fits with the rest of the piece, it isn't aggressive enougth for that.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
damm how i have missed reading your words...this is fabulous,. the whole way in which you put it together...i love every bit of it.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
-.'and if my shame could be adequately transformed into words i'd be a shakespearian masterpiece...but i am an inanimate object masquerading as a girl...'~excellent.


On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, Doc (186) writes:
very nice ending


On Monday July 11th, 2005, Twilight (2101) writes:
i fricken love the ending...it hot me hard for some reason. keep this up..im loving it.



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/7929/65705 on Saturday October 11th, 2008 07:24 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)