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It was a pale horse,
The palest of white
And his name who sat upon him was Death.
And I could swear I shook the hand of the Devil,
Selling away my soul, intertwined with fear.
Then looking back on myself, small and infantile,
Recalling the simplicity,
And the tiniest of desires.
How could such beauty turn awry?
A magnificent diamond turned to an ebony soul.
Then I see the white horse, befitting hell.
Dominance over the earth and so many
As if to kill with a sword.
Spewing famine and death over the world.
Hades followed with him.
And like a fool,
Or perhaps in spite of my wellbeing
My purpose is, indeed, a horse of that color
I shook his hand,
Sealed the deal with beauty and with grace,
And I rode away
Never to look back
I rode the white horse that day.



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On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (281) writes:
Love it this was so awesome:)


On Saturday March 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1700) writes:
Fantastic write, the build up to the conclusion and conclusion itself brilliant....:)


On Wednesday December 29th, 2004, sevil_sevas_tra (1) writes:
Very lovely work - i enjoy your imagery; you've definitely got a unique style. Thank you for your comment!


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:
Wow... cool story... my first read of you... gonna see where this goes... 1, Seth


On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
"Recalling the simplicity, And the tiniest of desires. How could such beauty turn awry?" such beautiful lines. very insightful...i will be reading more of your work..


On Friday December 17th, 2004, Clerik (49) writes:
It is easy to identify with your works as well,very nice.


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, rondant (76) writes:
very nice......Ronda


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:
I love it. One thing is that so many people imagine Death to be a black horse, strangely. But in my experience the truth is never that plain. After all, evil often disguises itself in a form of good.....


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
Exactly the point I was trying to make! thank you.


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:
"...behold the pale horse, and the man who sat upon him was death; and hell followed with him." from the bible(can't remember which book) nice spin, VERY well written. applause! b


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
Oh yes, you are the first person to catch onto that. I believe it is from Revelations 6:8 or something like that...


On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, shadowsinthelight (210) writes:
Yes, you are correct, some bibles he is a pale horse, but in the catholic bible he is a pale green horse. Go figure. Very nice write. S.


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:
very awesome write


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Raven (378) writes:
So many interpretations flooded my mind upon reading this... I almost feel overwhelmed. Very, Very nice piece, WhiteHorse... and an excellent first post. Welcome to Dp. _Raven


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity (131) writes:
Nicely done, very good. You write with a sense of elegance that comes to a reafreshing point in my mind. Welcome to DP. ~Diviana~


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Grey Lies (227) writes:
A magnificent diamond turned to an ebony soul....love that line...well done



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