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   I wish I could start this story off with a bang, some glimpse of a bleak future that I could flashback from, or this profound foreshadowy thing, a sort of best of times/ worst of times thing. but I can't, and even if I could it wouldn't be right. The truth is it just started with a sad lonely girl crying in her room.
   and I can't say why she cried, she had never told us. But I knew on some subconscious level that some heartless person had been too careless with words and had produced the salty water that ran now down her cheek.
   and I can't say how many times it happened before.It was a number that God himself would have to count on his fingers. Someone would say the wrong thing and her happiness would shatter like a bowl dropped from the side of the Grand Canyon.
   There isn't much I can say at all, but I can say that it was the last time. Because she took her razor and dragged it across her wrists. And her tears became tiny drops in a sea of blood.
   I wisjh I could end this with a bang, some triumph over evil or a happily ever after.More than anything I wish I could use one of those endings where everything just keeps going, same as it was before, but I can't, it just ended with a sad lonely girl crying in her room, who decided she hated her life.



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On Monday February 7th, 2005, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:
He's got a point there has do be something really wrong in your life for you to go to that extreme don't judge someone until you've been there


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
+looks at Elises comment and sighs+ Unless you have been to the point that nothing was stopping you from opening a vien to end the pain You have no call to say that, it looks that way from the outside yes. But have you ever thought how terrible the pain w


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Six-Out (1798) writes:
I've been there, so I'll say it. Suicide is the pussy's way out.


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
Ok now that I have said that, Great work, though suicide is never really a pleasant subject.


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
would have to be to completely override your will to live? To drive you to the point that not only do you no linger have the will to live, but in fact have the will to die, to take your own life, something that our very nature screams against.


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:
terribly sad...i've been there before...~A


On Sunday January 9th, 2005, stormtalk (881) writes:
Cheer up, mate. It's never so bad, once you get to know it better.


On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Elise (262) writes:
Sad story, if only she knew suicide was the pussy's way out of things and hurts others more than it would've hurt her..and theres no going back...


On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:
thank you


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:
I appreciate the gesture, but I am not suicidal, and I am also a male, and I realize that this is cliche, but I like it, also, thanls for complimenting my writing style


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, VenomPlease (176) writes:
Fuck cliche. You write about whatever you want to write about as long as it keeps you from doing whatever it is you say you want to do. Everyone feels this way, just let it out. As long as it's real thats all that matters.


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
just trying to help her grow as a writer. she wont grow if she is convinced that this is as good as it gets. no one told her not to write it...:D


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
him*


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
very cliche...and typical. but i read it..so please dont cry:P


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
writting about suicide is so cliché that the poem has to be really good to be fully appreciated by artist or intellects. other than that you're writting style is pretty good.



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