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DONE!!!

Everythings cold and hard and wet
You've taught me a lesson I'll never forget
Buckets of tears and cups of blood
All with my face down in the mud
Sputtering suffering trying to breathe
You literaly brought me down on my knees
How you ask, I never touched you
Don't you see, you didn't have to.

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On Monday December 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

holy s***.....wow. breathtaking. -zay

On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, blue (1701) writes:

"Buckets of tears and cups of blood"...that's great! let ME know when it's finished! ;) ~B

On Friday November 26th, 2004, Rone4611 (156) writes:

waiting for the end... so much suspence in these half written ones =)

On Friday November 26th, 2004, darkleprechaun (68) writes:

berry nice... me likes ... should finish soon i hope so i can read it... the sooner the better hehehe YEAH!

On Friday November 26th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:

i also look forward to the rest good start

On Friday November 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (134) writes:

This was a good start but it would be better if it went even further! Your writing is assume and I hope to read more latter! Welcome to DP!

On Friday November 26th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:

look forward to seeing the rest of this, good write so far though, lemme know when its finished ;)

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