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as i pull my life together it begins to fray around the edges.
my heart again becoming stone, all that she taught me slowly oozing away... how to let go... how to live again,
but that's okay no worries now... life's so much simpler now.
the tears i thought had run dry begin to fall again at the loss of what i might have had... seems everything is fragile... even my battle scarred heart and as i see her leaving,
it too begins to fall apart... she hasn't really gone anywhere... physically... but i can feel her leaving all the same...
i've lived through worse but i don't want to live through this again... as if there's a choice!
I WILL NOT GIVE UP... I DON'T KNOW HOW AND WILL NEVER LEARN!!!
so i guess that's all for now... the rambling of a sad forlorn soul....

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On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, Trapped_with_Insanity (128) writes:

For all the others times I have had a million words to say a semi simple thing, but now I make up for it by being unable to put anything into words. This was so...heartfelt and as thick with emotion as the thoughtless clinging to a lover...

On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, Trapped_with_Insanity (128) writes:

I have no other words, you could say that this is just the "rambling of a sad forlorn soul", rending to the edges of my being...~Diviana

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, DeprivedOfReason (41) writes:

hmm... yes hmmm... wordless am i ... im sorry dave.. you feel this way.. i dont know if you used ::she:: as a metaphor.. im just overjoyed to have you writing again, and being privy to it..to parts of you

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

laced in emotion. the whole of this write- it is painful;possibly,b/c of my relation to a topic such as this,and i know how it is.i love the fist line,

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

an introduction to a seduction of a reality that is real;yet,so unfair.to have a relation to another, to see them as whole, but relate piece by piece ishard to do, and i honor you not giving up.and hope [she]feels your connection.

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, darkleprechaun (68) writes:

to a close friend... she should know who she is. dave

On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, darkleprechaun (68) writes:

to dor... no metaphor... but she should know who she is. dave

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