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Leave as you Were

Leave as you were
Just like before
Take my friends
The real and imaginary they all pretend
Moments left behind
But the memories aren’t so hard to find
You can’t stay
Even if you did in the end you’d go away
Take your tears
Give me back all those years
I can’t believe you would pretend
Pretend to be my friend
Give me back my piece of mind
If you ever be so kind
Go back to your place
Never show your face
Our friendship can never mend
You were never my friend
I was stupid to believe
So just go, leave
And now that you’re gone
I can now smile and live on
You’re no longer at my side
With our friendship you died
It’s too bad though I’m not sad
You were my best and only friend I’ve ever had

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On Thursday February 24th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

beautiful write...i know all too well the pain felt in losing someone close to you..

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:

I like it... conveys what you want its wonderful. *Raven*

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:

great write..i love it..i only have a couple title suggestions, if u wanna take one..b my guest..it doesnt matter if u use them or not.'Leave' or as u said "Leave As You Are" or maybe even 'Pretend' i love this poem..truly do! -Kel

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

What about Victory Speech? No clue, I'm not that great with titles either and mine usually are just words that describe the main idea of my works. Nicely done, regardless of what title you pick:) ~Ship!

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Sex Slave (100) writes:

wow it is good-Danny

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, MindRape (890) writes:

nice write :) as for title suggestion if this were my piece I would call it "Gone"

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, happilydepressed (216) writes:

i'll think about it

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (61) writes:

if i am getting the right interpretation outta this one, then it sounds like you lost your best friend, perhaps a lover, so title it the emotions you feel towards them for leaving,

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, happilydepressed (216) writes:

I need a title and if you've ever read any of my other poems you probaly know I suck at giving my poems titles. SO if someone has an idea, please tell me.

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...some may say I suck at titles, because I simply use the main idea or subject as my title, but it's an option...what do 'you' consider the main topic for the write...? that may be a good thing to use...

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...of course, a hard-to-title work could also be given an abstract title, just because it works so damn well; and those tend to be done by people that like to make others think...

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...simply put, I can't title it for you, but I do hope the advice helps you a bit...

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, happilydepressed (216) writes:

I was thinking Leave as You Are because I wrote it with Come as you Are by Nirvana, it kinda flow like it

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