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Blind

You see yourself
As nothing,
An insignificant
Nonentity.
But you are
So much more
Than that

I wish you could
See yourself
Thru my eyes,
Or Jimmy’s,
...Or even Jen’s...
For then you would see
The beautiful you
That you’ve hidden
Deep inside

Jared, baby, I know this depression has you trapped
and you feel like you’re falling in a downward spiral...
but this is where i step in. i’ll be here always
to talk to, to cry to, whatever you need
...you know where to find me...

Love always, Jess

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On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

beautiful. insanely beautiful.

On Monday April 26th, 2004, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

i read this... over and over... and over... and every time i cry... i... just dont know about myself anymore... i dont know what to do... i... feel indescriblable... but its worth something with people like you... and i know ive said it before... but than

On Monday April 26th, 2004, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

thank you... ti amo

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:

hang in there bro. it only gets better from here. A_C

On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

touching, containing much humility, humanistic........well done.......urban

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

Inadvertanly or not, if you view the poem as a whole, i see tears falling into a bowl. I have no idea if this holds any significance, but it seemed to me that is made this poem just that much more touching than it was when i read it the first of five tim

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

times. Nevertheless, I thought this was a very sweet, heart-felt piece. Very touching...^vTracerv^

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:

ah yes.... I know one person like this... and I swore to her that if she jumps, I'd be there to catch her... I can relate a lot again

On Thursday May 15th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

That is very sweet...wish for someone to care that much for me, you are very lucky

On Friday April 18th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

jess... thank you.. for everything. im sorry i put you through this. but if it werent for you, and jimmy... just. thank you. it means alot to me.

On Thursday April 24th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

you are more than welcome, my dear Sir Jared. and i am glad it means so much to you because your friendship means so much to me (obviously:) )

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