DarkPoetry -|- Sky Singer -|- empty

empty

written 3.13.2005

you promise
these things
with the best
intentions
but thoughtfulness
only goes
so far
when your words
are nothing
more than
a lyrical
composition
of syllables
~*~

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on empty

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, XTwistedOrchidX (106) writes:

welcome to my world sweetness.. words are ALWAYS lyrical compositions and not much more.. but thats just my bitter bitterness........

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, Nihilitis (13) writes:

I like to think that words can convey much more weight than any other mode, but by the same token, can be the emptiest of expressions. I love this. It's short, to the point, and aesthetically pleasing all the same.

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, Nihilitis (13) writes:

oops, strike 'all the same'. Meant to say 'at the same time.' Pitiful, the effects of sleep deprivation. I'm really one to nitpick about grammar. : )

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/780/59173 on Friday December 05th, 2008 09:29 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)