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"Response to ALWAYS FEEL THE RAIN (it can't rain all the time)" by Sky Singer

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lying naked
in my
cozy
lonely
bed is just
another reminder
of how
far way
you are
and i try to
strip myself
of this
weakness
as easily as
yesderday's jeans

[and the sky turns grey]

we are what
we have
always been
looking for;
imperfect,
but the pieces
fit.
how unfair is
the timing
that
binds us
and
divides us.
and i can
hear you
say:
"but darlin',
life's not fair"

[and the rain clouds thicken]

but
lying naked
in my
comforitable
uncomforting
bed is just
another reminder
that
tomorrow
is one day
closer
and time
will not always
divide
and i take comfort in this

[and the sky fades to blue]

with a smile
spread wide
across my
sleepy
countenance
i curl up
in my
cozy
loney
bed
with only
dreams
of you.

[it won't be raining tomorrow]



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On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
nto bad at all, the beginnign was very nicely done, nice symbolism.


On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
I like! You write so well! Keep it up!


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Awesome write, I enjoyed the flow. Great work. ~L


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:
i was expecting a grim outcome with this....but it turned out nice and optimistic....lovely work..


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
Awwwe, now this is a purdy piece. Beautifuly done. [D&A]


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:
thanks, Doc


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:
this is really wonderful...I love the interspersed reports on the sky...terrific turns of phrase "we are what we have always been looking for; imperfect, but the pieces fit." and "lying naked in my comforitable uncomforting bed". Great


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:
damn. that one hit me pretty hard. but in a really warm, nostalgic way. kudos. i really like it. much. love.


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, Evil (491) writes:
i love this. it makes me miss my lovey. thanks. =) _-=Evil=-_


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:
...i miss mine, too. thanks for the comment


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (17) writes:
"Can't Rain All The Time" Fits this poem just right. I love you Jess!



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