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killing me softy

i love you
with all
of my heart
but it's
breaking.
i'm sitting here
shaking;
tortured and
tormented,
i'm kept here
just waiting
for that
doleful moment
when my
world
falls apart
and i'm left
with the
remnants
of this,
my shattered
heart.

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On Friday September 10th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:

i am too waiting for that moment. damn, this one hits home! ~sex~

On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

dammit now i have that damn lauryn hill song in my head. but either way...this was pretty damn beautiful. the remnants of a shattered heart. awesome line there...

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I like this, and as I said before take those chances if you don't you will never know (or be able to learn from them).

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

I like the shortness, i dont know why but it just fits, well done.~~~Grave

On Friday January 30th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:

aw great poem, i like how it sounds with the short lines...

On Friday January 30th, 2004, LovedByAMiracle (54) writes:

usually these poems of heartache all sound the same and pretty much suck. but this was so different. it was wonderful. im definitely going to check out more of your work

On Friday January 30th, 2004, sweetambrosia (103) writes:

I'm not exactly sure why, but this really hit me, it's just beautiful! --sweets

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