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today (i need you)

it’s one of
those days
i wish i had
a field
to run through.
race the wind
and not have
a care in
all the world

it’s one of
those days
i wish i had
that proverbial
hole
to crawl into
curl up
and cry
to my heart’s
content

it’s one of
those days
i wish i could
break free
from fabricated
chains
and invisible walls

it’s one of
those days
...i need you...
more than ever
here beside me,
holding me
close,
keeping me
sane

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On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Drea (920) writes:

...and somehow you have wrote the words that have been running through my mind for days. I know this feeling TOO well. This almost made me cry. ~Drea~

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

I too am 'having one of those days' Eve... great work, lovely structure. FF

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (17) writes:

Love, you only need to look at my picture when i'm not there and you can always know i'm wanting you in my arms and thinkin about you

On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:

if only it were that easy... love you, baby

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

heyyy this is nice, lovely. makes me feel the same *cries* nice and simple, and wonderful.

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, braindeadpoet (127) writes:

Simple and beautifully put...I loved this one. Good job---jer

On Thursday January 15th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:

thanks jer :)

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

I too can relate to this in a BIG way...it sucks to know what or who u need but it orthey are not atainable for one reason or another...good one

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

i know exactly where you're coming from. and you put it in a way that i can feel it too.

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

Well...that hit me...I completely understand. Way way too well. Nicely written.

On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:

You have no idea....I feel this way...RIGHT now.....thanks..

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:

amazing, isn't it? :) thanks for the comment

On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I think everyone has felt this way at one point or another. Good write!

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