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The Slut Says to the Tool

I was with him
when I said I had the flu
when I said
'love you too'
(I'm cheating on you)

He is a lick of lightning-
and we flash electric blue
but you have no clue
love yo
u too

My body is your novelty
it speaks of a trifle that flew
I want my id to howl like a thundercloud
so I’m cheating on you

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On Thursday June 19th, 2008, Jonas (877) writes:

the theme juxtaposed with the simple lilting cadence is deliciously not quite what or where i want to be... but i feel a kinship with the words in the deeper fissures of my brain.

On Friday June 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:

love the end of the second stanza and the reference to "im ceating on you"

On Wednesday May 23rd, 2007, SamoneDrone (400) writes:

This is vibrant and racy with pleasurable deception. An upstanding piece. ....-Samone

On Thursday March 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (13) writes:

wicked and devious. i love it. the discription is amazing. it gave me a great visual.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:

Man, Alison...if I had known that was what it took to get your beautiful mind to traverse these pages again, I would have said something perverse and inappropriate long ago... : )

On Tuesday January 23rd, 2007, Instant Insanity (726) writes:

Fucking Cumslut, Ready to fuck. What out for those girls. They'll go for the suck. Nasty ass hoeS!!!!!! ][ ][

On Wednesday January 24th, 2007, ScorpionHela (4) writes:

You're right. We should definately what out for those cumsluts. We sure wouldn't want them to go for the suck.

On Wednesday January 24th, 2007, Six-Out (1798) writes:

Best reply to a poem, ever. This piece was awesome, by the away.

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Mab (970) writes:

I agree on both counts ;)

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, An Expired Member (5) writes:

This was soooo great!!!

On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, GreyDividing (193) writes:

I hate cheater's. However this did provoke a powerful reaction so it is a good poem. Well done.

On Thursday November 10th, 2005, RepulsiveAttraction (108) writes:

i miss your words, your clever charm, your brilliant mind, where have you gone?

On Saturday August 6th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:

This was brilliant. Ingenious. Wonderful... -kitty

On Friday February 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (446) writes:

this is damned clever.... really great flow, just rolls of the tongue.... awesome write. Thank you.

On Monday January 24th, 2005, flying_fox (764) writes:

This is terrific - the layout is brilliant. It's so short but so punchy. Kudos.

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

this is incredible."He is a lick of lightning- and we flash electric blue but you have no clue". you know the ways to speaking without a voice. thank you.

On Sunday July 4th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:

I want my id to howl like a thundercloud-jesus this is fantastic...

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

As i thought your account at DP was lost, I'm so graciously glad it isn't. Your work is, as always, marvelous, i do wish you would post more. ->Sue

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:

*nods* i do as well...i'm just discovering you and i can't stress enough how powerful your writing is to me.

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:

awesome write, with a good meaning which is hard to find these days, my props!

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

wow. Human interation at it's finest, huh?! you can just feel the not rightness of this one.

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