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Another Day In Hell

Wandering these lonely hallways,
You all just walk by and stare.
Is it my attitude that turns you away?
Or is it the color of my hair?

Is it all the jewelry and black I wear?
Or is it the cold look that I give?
Maybe its the fact I'd rather die,
than to just invisibly live.

Is it because I don't give a shit,
about you or how you feel?
Or maybe because I get my nightmares
mixed up with what is real.

That's it, I figured it out,
I know why you can't get through.
It's the fact you know SHIT about me,
And I'll never want you to.

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On Monday December 6th, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL (18) writes:

well thanks it seems like its kkinda too juvinile for my taste now but i still like lol thanks :P

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

nice write.....i know this feeling all to well....but...i couldn't have expressed it like you did....thanks for sharing and welcome to dp....-knight

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, lost_moody_soul (34) writes:

I love it! the words flowed just right;)

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:

by the way...This poem, I think we can all relate to somehow...however, it just lacks a certain orginality...it's a good start though... Kya

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (71) writes:

and liz,you are a stupid bitch! nobody cares what youd ''love to see''!i think she writes pretty fucken well and if you dont like her work then quit taking time to read and fucken critisize them!

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL (18) writes:

look dont say that kind of thing liz is trying to help me out and helping me expand my writing plz dont critisize her

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:

look, you have *NO* right to haul off and call Liz a bitch, she has the right ot express her opinion...just like you,

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:

and the reason she OFFERS her opinion is to expand one's horizons, and perhaps give them a different veiw and maybe even help their style...if you can't handle that, then maybe DP isn't for you...

On Friday November 19th, 2004, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (71) writes:

this is great also! you must keep writing, i love your work

On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Stormcomin (43) writes:

A great write with very visual meaning. Good job.

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL (18) writes:

thank you:)

On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:

This sends me back to my highschool days, i can remember feeling like this. well expressed. welcome to DP :)

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL (18) writes:

Yeah it was one of those days where everything gets overwhelming and u have to let it out somehow. thats usually when I write most.

On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Valentine (491) writes:

You have executed the exquisite feelings of the heart marvellously. I've often wanted to say something like this but I can't . . and through so few verses you have conveyed the feeling that brushes past us all. A great write, Amanda ~ Rose.

On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL (18) writes:

Thank you very much Rose. That was one of my really early poems I just wanted to share with those I thought might be wanting to say the same thing. Thanks~Amanda~

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Liz (401) writes:

It's always great to see new writers. Pissed off high school goth poetry, not so much. I'd really love it if you wrote something a little more original, something to showcase your diverse skills. It's obvious you can write, now show us how well.

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