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"Life" by Jewelnique

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Downward spirals, circles and spheres
Interlocking angles…falling fear
Chaotic psychotic black holes of life
Sucked through the atmospheric vacuum so blue

Spinning life spirals
Depression and mourn
Do tumble and fumble
Into the motionless ocean of nothing

Blood shed bursting so bright
Negligent violence accepted so norm
Adolescent minds do warp and swarm
Into a future so doomed never to bloom

Head on collisions
Of dreams and visions
Hopeful realities
Heart set casualties
Social influence
Torpedoed ignorance




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On Monday November 29th, 2004, blue (1700) writes:
I...really liked how it ended. I like it,yup! b


On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, Kali Ma (53) writes:
I like this poem, though the end doesn't seem very final. Instead of a nice tying up of the poem, it just stops. Perhaps that is the effect you were going for, but I just thought to mention. Good word choice, and powerful images. ~ Kali Ma



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