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Chaotic Thoughts of A Mind At Rest

winds gracing
plains
of longing

whispering of
pains long forgotten

shadowed paths
splintering
minds of decisions

branches weaving
through night skys tapestry

light shimering
from moons
iridescent glow

holding the power
of ebb and flow

guiding the seasons
change

as the winds of pain
invade this mind once again

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On Sunday September 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:

You paint a beautiful picture no matter what you do... art and poetry

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

i was rewarded with a picture painted in my mind and unrestrained, gorgeous flow with this write...i am very impressed.

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Clerik (49) writes:

pecise,focused,clear,well done.

On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

I love it. Like a whisper on the wind

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, indefined (684) writes:

mmm... strong yet subtle. no flourishing or circus act, just the breeze flowing around the minds eye. good work indeed.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, StAinedNblood (43) writes:

This is great good job, I like your work a lot

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

I agree with Rose, you have a wonderful talent with imagery, and you painted this picture so clearly in my mind. I feel like I am there...Feeling everything. Wonderful write, my friend.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Sin (1623) writes:

i agree with Valentine, this is exceptional, wonderful write ~kristy

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

wonderful. Silent, magnificent imagery ~ Rose

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

__Wow. This is an exceptional write. Again, i envy the way you are so precise with your message and emotion, in so few words - "shadowed paths splintering minds of decisions" . . the moons iridescent glow . . the wind invading the mind. Immaculate, wonder

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