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the winged servant no more
cast upon this parched earth
a broken shell
the wings once used
now torn from the flesh
scars bore from
holly wars of long ago
cursed to travel this world
in search of what will not be seen
the wanderer shall he forever be



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On Friday February 11th, 2005, sIo (872) writes:
i can feel the pain...the scars of broken wings...that image was tres bonne. wonderful write.


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
the angel in his pain...beautiful


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
Exceptionally beautiful . . "the wings once used now torn from the flesh" . . i'll await the part two . . so wonderful ~ Rose


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
beautiful piece, the ending was well stated and crushing.. lovely work


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, elisa (1990) writes:
the nameless Angels path........sounds very familiar.....this is beautiful:) elisa


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
beutifully written...very vivid...eve though it is rather short...it hlds so much...i want a part two


On Monday November 22nd, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
Very nicely written. I like the end as well. Everything was really good.


On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
i loved the way this was done... esp the end..


On Friday November 19th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:
the story of a fallen arch-angel, a restless vagabond, i loved the last two lines man. i have said as such in different words, it's comforting that theres another nomadic wanderer at DP :)



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