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Memorial path

shards shattered and broken
from moments past
underneath my feet
walking along this memorial path
each piercing image
pulls me back to those days
fresh in my mind
those times of joy
and peace
have gone
as I'm left
wandering alone
upon this road
of splintered dreams

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On Thursday March 17th, 2005, steuss (141) writes:

While wandering around it is often we find ourselves... Well done, the listless open feeling was intense. I can see an open wasteland slowly passing by painfully. Well done!

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

This is a write i can relate to. It struck a chord.

On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

short but the point is easily seen

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

"upon this road of splintered dreams" exceptional work . . i envy the way you express so much in so few words ~ Rose

On Friday November 19th, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:

Short and sweet. This describe me with every word. **claps hands** You did an excellent job writting this.

On Friday November 19th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:

a jewel found within a pile of rocks...wonderful write

On Friday November 19th, 2004, MGood (77) writes:

Wow. I love this! Wonderful imagery! ~Mary

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