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"The Battles Rage" by Nightmarist

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we stand at the fore front
of an army unknown
we are united as one
charging down upon the enemy
the wait is endless
finally the clashing of swords armor and sheilds
the constant falling of bodies
death surrounds us all
as the battle rages
the fog of war sets in
everything slows
we move on instinct alone
no more petty rights or wrongs
no reason to the madness
pushing on
finally a clearing can be seen
carving through
we find we have won
atleast today
for tomorrow we pray
to be set free
of these warriors days





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On Thursday December 29th, 2005, weyvern (103) writes:
good one and i agree with everyone else the last line is perfect! good one!


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
Sad write but I enjoy the view of war for some reason, even if I don't like the loss that comes with it


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
A wonderful write . . sadenning . . strangely heart-felt . . a unique write . . the last line was perfect ~ Rose


On Friday November 19th, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
This poem has a really good flow to it and it was very well written. Every line was pounding. Excellent.


On Thursday November 18th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
i really like the whole sense of sadness and madness....this is a really great peice


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Asmodeus (12) writes:
"no reason to the madness" this says the most to me, very strong line all in all. great piece to read


On Monday November 15th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:
indeed written well, conclusion was excellent.


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:
I love the sense of battle...Written well.-Kefkism


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Jewelnique (8) writes:
hmm...i like...i can picture everything and the feeling of the battle



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