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The strings are the things that bind
thumping pounding rhythms
bodies twisting and writhing
the gentle pain of fingers
guiding the flow
five become one
creating this ungodly song
haunting,flowing,changing and growing
the music drips from us
like sweat falling to the ground
playing for hours
finally we fall
one by one
until only silence remains
satisfied
we stand
exchange good byes
knowing tomorrow
we begin again



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On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Litteratus (73) writes:
powerful, beautiful imagery and flow that matches the subject matter.


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
lovly write, great imagery ::twirls a bit::


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:
very good. amazing imagary.


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Sin (1623) writes:
this was lovely, your words were perfect here ~kristy


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:
u capture such movement and moment in this,terrific write


On Friday November 19th, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
Incredibly written. I just loved every bit of it. Great job!


On Thursday November 18th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
such a simple thing becomes so interesting and worth while in your words...its a whole new world...filled with bright colors and strange shapes....i love it


On Saturday November 13th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:
Very nicely done... Great poem. -JiNx(ie)


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Stormcomin (43) writes:
Very nice. As a musician myself, I can appreciate what you're saying. Jamming till all hours of the night, making it great, or butchering it to hell. But at least we found out what to leave out of the set. Rock on!



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