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splintered visions(revised)

I see both past and present
in a blur of the moment
I treasure it
knowing it can not last
my sight is fading
and my vision is clouded
I can't allow this to stand in my way
I've survived so much worse
though I still fear the day it comes
wishing no one told me
wishing it would come as a surprise
the knowing is killing me
peice by peice
an obsession I can't stop
my talents wasting
sketch books
filled with distorted images
eyes mangled and twisted
from faces I've never seen
this obsession
will be the death of me

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On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Sin (1623) writes:

~the knowing is killing me peice by peice ~ i agree with ve that line is killer..brillantly done ~kristy

On Friday November 19th, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:

Very well done. I felt your with every word. Loved it.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:

the knowing is killing me peice by peice. amen to that. another well constructed and conveyed write. i dig it.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:

well written...alot of strong emotion went into this pecie...i feel every word...as if you where screaming them into my ear...and then sobbing them onto my shoulder....very nice write

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

sounds like me on a very very bad day. lovely write

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