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In the beginning she knew,
She felt it in her veins
She had control
Fully.

Never questioned herself,
Or anything else.

Just an escape
Not often at all,
Twice a month,
Once a week,
Whenever he
Forgot to call.

It seemed to seep
Deeper,
It creeped into her blood.
Startled her
She faltered,
Panicked,
And hesitated.

Only for a moment,
Yet the damage was done.
She fell...
Like men before the messiah.

On her knees
For this underminding
Friend.

Fiend.

No longer
In control.

A slave to the unknown.

And nothing knew the torture
Like those hands,
That skin,
The tears.

Wrapped herself around
While trying to unwind
All the damage,
And the pain.

Everyday was harder,
New nothing but release.
She knew
It had to stop.

Destroying herself.

One day the wait ceased.
She had a reason to breathe
And though, he'd been through all...

Thick and thin
Every inch of skin,

She suffocated him.

His spirit lives on
In everyone of them
That still find him


Perfect.




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On Monday October 16th, 2006, GreyDividing (194) writes:
I like this. You have a unique way of speaking from your heart. ~Fav~


On Friday October 13th, 2006, verablue (156) writes:
beautifly done!


On Monday December 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
I like this poem good job


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (404) writes:
i love your style. this poem kind of tells a little story and i think you did it very well, where most don't.


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
i have never heard love sound so lovely


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, asailorsangel (39) writes:
I have read and re-read and it is definetly a place I have visited love the 3rd paragraph you put it in to words better than I....ASA~


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:
Brilliantly done...I can almost feel the emotion as if it were my emotion...Very well done indeed...


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
this had an interesting ending...like im watching the scenes play through the mind of one most fed up...with this..with that. whatever it may be. justice was served.



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