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Sun presses my eyes
down into the dark of me
..Absorbing all
..reflecting nothing
..reflection nothing
my religion did clothe me
..Swallow lumps to the throat
..Remain forever still
..Censor
..Hide
..Resigned
Thus refined
..Confined
..Slowest suicide
..Obliteration
..Almost gone.

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On Wednesday December 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Does this mean that you feel your faith is killing you?

On Wednesday December 29th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

"Sun presses down my eyes" Its the creation of visuals like this that slap an all beef sticker onto your poetry my friend. 100% authentic innovation, with the combination of flawless [truthful] human stick emotion. [D&A]

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

fierce!!!!and deep.......well done...................urban

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