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Blindsight

I awoke this morning without eyes
I had lost them—in a dream
They were carried away on a current of lies
To drown—in a dissembling stream

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On Sunday April 17th, 2005, Philla (137) writes:

Short and to the point. Oh the power of the written word, right? *grins* Love it. -*Philla*-

On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:

Short and beauitful

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, Savannah (285) writes:

WOW. The first line of this poem just absolutely hit me in the face! Few words, but damn well said.

On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:

Short and sweet, well, not really sweet, but good. Nice write.

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:

ahhh...*brilliant* i am speechless...but please know i completely enjoyed this. ill have to come back and leave a better comment...when i gather my head ...

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, K_Love (686) writes:

"They were carried away on a current of lies To drown—in a dissembling stream" --Incredible line, I really enjoyed this, wonderful job.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:

What an intricate and finely woven write.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, lordshadow (211) writes:

very short, but awesome nonetheless... well done.

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