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"The Chill of December" by Kali Ma

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The reaching chill of brisk December
touches my impressionable soul,
leaving it barren and windswept
as the snowy fields of empty plains
desolate as a freezing hell.
Devoid of warmth - a long since dead furnace,
whom's insides miss the feel of fire
and retain a dormant memory
of flames of caring, friendship and feeling;
subconscious, yet lingering like a deep pain
healed over but still aching inside.
The haunting memory of a child's laughter
rings in the echoing cavern of my hollow mind,
each repetition transforming the pleasant yet eerie sound
to a horrible rendition of a mocking demon,
gloating over ideals lost and love tainted
through grave misunderstanding and lazy neglect.
The self-imposed loneliness eats away at me,
breaking down my prison of fortifications,
and leaving me huddled in the pouring rain,
drenched to the bone, and lost to the world.



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On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
You do have quite a way of painting out a picture in everything that you write. I really enjoy that. Please, continue to write.


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
This is an awesome write. Love the ending especially. Great work


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:
wow. this was amazing. this took me places i didn't thing i wanted to go to...until i did. thank you.


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Rone4611 (156) writes:
second thing iv read of yours brillant =) off to read more!


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, hopeless (62) writes:
your imagery is outstanding, and the depth that is portrayed here is amazing... ~hopeless


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
this write took me on a journey...breathtaking, and exceptionary in the level of depth.Much love. -zay



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