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White foam from the crashing sea covers the sturdy bastion,
But still the endless, patient rock holds fast
against all that nature can throw at it.
Though still strong, the once raw edges have been smothed -
worn slowly down after countless years of misabuse.
The spirit can only be young for so long
before despair conquers, and hope is lost in the mists.
and when the time comes, and the tower falls,
all those in it's trust and care shall be defeated -
left naked and bare, crying for sturdy walls
against the brutal truth of the uncaring world.
No more shall there be a respite; a haven to cling to,
a patient and loving mother to hold them tight
and tell them their fears are unfounded -
the demons figments of youthful imagination.
They will see their ARE demons out in the dark
still visible when eyes are open, not vanishing anymore,
and the fear and grief shall drive them mad.

*** To Mocha, who saw me through my youth and will leave me soon. I am not ready to be left alone. ***



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On Saturday April 9th, 2005, October Death (27) writes:
Wow. From the first LINE my imagination had a field day, I can see it all so clearly...very nice.


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
Very good all the way through. I feel your pain. I know how hard that is. Very good job.


On Friday December 17th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
wonderful write; feels somehow...eternal and wise, with deep sorrow. Beautifully done.


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Rone4611 (156) writes:
a-m-a-z-i-n-g metaphor and again, perfect imagry, i can feel that waters foam =)


On Friday December 10th, 2004, WhoIAM (37) writes:
i liked this poem so much i am going to say... once again... Great poem


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
"The spirit can only be young for so long before despair conquers, and hope is lost in the mists" nice work.


On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, WhoIAM (37) writes:
great theme. great poem.



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