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If I was beautiful would you love me?
If I trapested around in black satin with my thorn crown held high and sunflower bruise embedded choker wrapped tight around my neck would you start to notice me or even pretend to care when I stood before you in that alone presence?
I doubt it... you never did before when I tried to play pretty...
Oh how lovely it would be though..
How lovely it would be if I could reincarnate myself for you from my now charred soul back to the cemetery's December powder...
Please.. let us play pretty again...?

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On Wednesday March 22nd, 2006, Jaded Ireland (28) writes:

very nice

On Saturday November 19th, 2005, Solitary Dreamer (30) writes:

very cool :)

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, Metal Lullaby (63) writes:

0_0

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

few times before has morbidity been that beautiful.

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

Interesting...

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

i had to come back to this, even though I've already commented. wonderful work kitt, some beautiful lines really stood out.."If I trapested around in black satin with my thorn crown held high"..wonderful

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, blue (1756) writes:

very nice work! i especially love the last line! B.

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Drea (925) writes:

Amazing imagrey. Very vivid. A lot of emotion as well. I'm glad I found your work. I hope you stay around I would love to keep reading what you post. Welcome to DP.

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Kitt (33) writes:

thank you, that's really flattering to hear someone wants to continue seeing my work. :) -kitt

On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, En Sabah Nur (65) writes:

truly wonderful...welcome to DP and i hope u enjoy ur stay...~Bullet~

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

I have just stumbled upon your work, as I mostly do, and have come off better for reading this...It struck a chord in me that vibrates with rememberance...I have definately dealt with this before. You conveyed it so well, and is so few words.

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Kitt (33) writes:

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

You did a great job. Welcome to DP, Kitt.

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

nicely done.. and welcome to dp.. some great lines contained in this..

On Monday November 8th, 2004, Rone4611 (156) writes:

liked very much! welcome, any questions click the little envelope in the bottom of my box

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Kitt (33) writes:

thnx, it's so nice to have such a warm welcome from people. :)

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

That was raw and intense.Welcome to DP.

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Revolting Theatre (36) writes:

welcome to DP, excellent imagery. I like this piece. - Josh

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Kitt (33) writes:

thnx, that means a lot coming from you, josh.

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

Welcome to DP and I like this poem quite good in my eyes.... -JiNx(ie)

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