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ME??just KILLING my SELF! !

Life...life is a bitch

life will bring you to your knees,
make you cry out to the fucken world"GOD WHY ME"?

lifes an asshole,
wherever i go
it will corrupt my soul.

wherever i may be,
life keeps killing me!

why see life,
when ill soon see death?
why hurt inside,
when i can take my last breath,
by popping some pills,
and put a hole in my chest!!!!

hope yall love this on as much as i
did writing it :) -Black_Saint-

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On Monday August 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (48) writes:

oh man so simple yet so nice, me likey alot

On Friday November 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (134) writes:

This is so true! Great write!

On Sunday November 21st, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:

so fucking true. anyone could end their damn life. i aint got the guts though. hee hee

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:

i think we often forget the good things in life as well... im not sure what to say so im not going to say anything

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

to let all know i did not exactly write this one,to mean that i actualy want this its just one of my views on life

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:

OMFG EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!! LETS KYLL R SELFS AT THE SAYME TYME> THAT WOULD B KOOL!!!! LUV THE RYME!

On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thats fucked up you love my work but you said that one of my works was shit???harsh

On Saturday December 2nd, 2006, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

it's called SARCASM, ass.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

If six reads this he'll have a fucking hayday. Interesting point of view but then again why not see life as opposed to nothing? Even when life gets shitty it's still always an interesting ride. ~Ship!

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

i agree but this is not my strongest views of life, just one of them.:>

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

That's cool. I think everyone has these thoughts at some point just realize that to some who have actually seen the "daggers edge" that this kind of talk might piss them off:)

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (134) writes:

No matter the spelling mistakes I was hear to read poetry not correct spelling! I think it was good!

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

well think ya

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:

hilarious

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Add another p to popping as well. *wink*

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thanks

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Oh, it hurts the eyes. x_x

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

Agreed.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

By the way...Unless you are talking of someone corru[pting your SHOES the spelling your looking for is S-O-U-L.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thats fucked up why u dont like me i don't know,but thanks for helping correct me.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

okay, lets retry this then, I am VERY against suicide, cutting,ALL that bullshit...your flow is childish and somewhat choppy, and no offense, but you need work...

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

I'm just giving me opinion, I don't dislike you, I don't know you...so how can I form an opinion on you?

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

well thank you and that is true i gess not all agree to it so thats kool i respect that...

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

hm, Childish Rhymes, bitching about how hard you have it and why you should kill yourself...all offense intended, this really blows...Kya

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (134) writes:

love it!

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