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***The way i felt,...at one time***

***the way her tears... make me want to change the world... so that it doesn't hurt her any more... yet regardless if i love her... hate her... wish she would die... or know that i would die with out her... it matters not. Because for once in my life... whatever she was to the world... she now becomes everything to me... and when i look in to her eyes... traveling... to the depths of her soul... and i say a million things... with out a trace of a sound... i know that my own life is inevitable... consumed with in the rhythmic beatings of her vary heart... i love her for a million reasons... no paper would do it justice, it is a thing not of the mind.....but of the heart***

*black SAINT*

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On Wednesday March 15th, 2006, IShouldEqualYou (27) writes:

i STILL love this...

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, broken_spirit (43) writes:

this is an awsome write....i can feel your love for this person....again good write

On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thank you your as beautifull as you are sweet...look for me on your comments,but give me a sec. i'll make comments.

On Friday November 26th, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:

you win the great "honor" of being added to my list ..... of favorite poets not my hit list ... yet that is. Nice poem here. -Necro

On Friday November 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (134) writes:

Very nice! OK better then nice it was incredible! Well done, favorite so far!

On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, alone (199) writes:

this is beautiful

On Friday November 19th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thanks yall that means alot to me truly it does :>

On Friday November 19th, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!! I love the way you write. your so good. i love the wording. god

On Friday November 19th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

this was sooo beautiful...genuine and feeling...

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

thank you i like your poem as well veary poetic and hope to hear from you on my other works ;)

On Friday November 19th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

this is pretty damn passionate. i dont like the structure of the piece though. but i think the substance this holds makes up for every bit of it...nicely written

On Friday November 19th, 2004, MindRape (861) writes:

very good write. So unafraid of your feelings and what others might think. I like this piece.

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