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My broken heart

I was so happy
Happy and free
When it was us
Just you and me
But then you dumped me
And left me alone
Deep in the dark
Where my sorrow could be shone
I knew it would end
With a broken heart
But I didn't think
ThatI would fall apart
Crying with such saddness
Deeply in pain
While you stand there
Watching in vein

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On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

pain expressed well in this piece...i know how you feel as well..~AoD

On Monday January 31st, 2005, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

Oh god, I know that feeling all too well. The pain is very clear in this poem. Very well written.

On Friday January 7th, 2005, Draven (51) writes:

hey man i know what you mean, but it will get better one day

On Friday December 31st, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Love hurts. ~Shane~

On Wednesday December 29th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

*agrees with frozen* broken hearts will some day mend... *huggles* great write.. -JiNx(ie)

On Friday December 17th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

broken hearts in time heal very sweet write.

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

i know what you mean. good write. i felt it

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