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I need to find myself again
I feel like my walls are closing in
There's just so much pressure to take
If this is a dream, I wish to awake
Even thew people who never frown
eventually will break down
Life can be such a fight
It's getting harder to tell what is right
As i walk down this twisted road
With the weight of the world as my load
I don't know what i'm trying to prove
Because in the end we neither win nor lose
I need to shed this skin i'm in
And find my true self again



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On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:
This is excellent!


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, DoctorAsh (505) writes:
wow .. this is very impressive - right now Im looking at this write, looking at the very blueprints, the very workings of the complex human condition, and how it's altering in its own prospective against it's circumstance: to find the solution, to figure


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, DoctorAsh (505) writes:
out how to survive. Very interesting. [D&A]


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
Now I remember why you are one of my favorite poets. This one sounds like me. I really liked it.


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
so does this mean that you, Ronda, can come out to play? Or do you just get to stay home after work or school & hide in your room? :) ~Shane~


On Friday November 19th, 2004, rondant (76) writes:
hummmm.... just depends on my mood. And if you're going to sing


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I love the part which says, "I need to shed this skin I'm in, & find my true self again."...


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
::claps:: well written



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