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Boom

My life is in shreads
But i keep hanging by that thread
If you want to laugh, go ahead
I might as well go back to bed
But i'll stay awake instead
With all these thoughts racing in my head
Then you tell me it's over, it's the moment I dread

BOOM
I'm dead

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On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, darkleprechaun (69) writes:

I mean no harm, however, it could have used a little more umph. though i did clearly understand you. It was well put.

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

I like this.

On Thursday November 4th, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:

Overall that was a great poem. I have been there. I always hated being teased or laughed at. I also liked the last few lines in there as well. Great poem!

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

"Then you tell me it's over, it's the moment I dread".... nicely done, simple but effective as well..

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:

Hmmmm..... I think I like this. Not sure why. But I do. I'll come back when I can clear my mind. -Glass

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

pure pain injected straight into the bloodstream.Boom,indeed.

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