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December seventh is the day
that my dad passed away
He liked to gamble, hunt, and fish
These are a few things that i will miss
He had cancer, don't you see
That it could happen to you or me
Not as close as i would of liked to be
But I loved him very much you see.


Me and my dad was never close,
and there are so many things I wished I said.
I got to spend the last couple of days with him
before he passed. He hugged me for the first time
ever, and told me that he loved me. At that very moment
I was at peace with my dad, and all my hatred vanished.
I guess what i'm trying to say is Don't take people forgranted,
sometimes they leave so fast you don't get to say goodbye.
There were so many things I should of said, but I didn't.
So, don't hold it in.




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On Sunday March 30th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:
Poignant and beautiful despite being impeccably sad! Sorry to read about your loss! Great to read someone with slightly different views on death though however! Beautiful Write!


On Wednesday December 29th, 2004, lost_moody_soul (34) writes:
beautiful..this poem touched me:( im sorry about your father


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Never give up.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
but we weren't close, either...


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
My own stepfather died of cancer...


On Monday November 1st, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
beautiful picture of a love never lost. touching..well done.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
I am sorry to hear that. I know what it's like to lose someone you really care about. If you ever want to talk, just send an im.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
if it is from your own experience.. :( ---calamity


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
very short and sweet.. i like this, and i'm sorry about your father..



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