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The Snow outside melts,
I wish my Heart would also,
All I do is harm.

The grass sees the day,
Now after long slumbering,
It will soon turn green.

Blurriness leaves me,
Beginning to thaw my heart.
I see I've done wrong.

I've quit getting drunk,
Please give me one last chance...Please?
I can do better.



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On Sunday March 9th, 2008, freudian-slip (397) writes:
perfect depiction of bargaining and introspection. dig it.


On Sunday March 9th, 2008, Alanarchy (1703) writes:
Hmmmm. From self pity, to emergence, to acceptance. But then on to wanting to jump right back in. To repeat the same mistakes? Or maybe get it right this time? Cool write. That second little haiku piece was my favorite. Nice work.


On Saturday March 8th, 2008, Kui (705) writes:
Ahh, snow



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