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My Cry For Help

Tears rush down my face as I hold the razor
My mind is filled with anger
My heart with guilt

* I make the first cut *

Blood slowly starts to flow
I call for help
No one answers
Beg for someone to stop me
Pray that it won't be too late

Someone please help me
I have no more control
It's too much to handle

Will you answer my cry for help?
Stop me from hurting myself?

Please help me before it's too late
Hear my call for help.

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On Friday June 24th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

cutting is a very personal, intimate and hard to understand action. expressing it is difficult and scary at best, and a subject many tiptoe around for various shallow reasons. this is a good write, great expression. ty

On Monday March 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

being a person once in a similar situation, I find that this poem somehow has a piece of me somewhere in it, even though the poet knows nothing of me. I commend you for this work and many of your others which I have taken a fondness to. Rachel ~ aka hopel

On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

(continued)Don't let them see you down because that will only bring a smile to their sick faces.

On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

I know how that cry for help feels. I have been there too many times. If you hurt yourself, all you are doing is letting everyone else who has hurt you win. Allowing them the satisfaction of what they caused. I learned that long ago. Don't let them win. D

On Friday December 10th, 2004, Clerik (49) writes:

This seems to be a popular subject for people on this site,however if it's something that you feel you need to say than just fucking say it. Also,on one of my works you said dp me sometime...what does that mean?

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

Danny, darling, you can talk to me anytime. The comments you get on this work may be rough. No one likes "cutter' poems. *sigh*

On Friday June 24th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

agreed, cutting poems are still taboo even though its more common than anyone wants to believe. you put your heart on the line writing about it, so if someone too shallow to understand critizes your subject matter, blow them off.

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (53) writes:

*Tears rush down my face as I hold the razor*, damn its so me, very good piece, i will track works from now and on...thanks..Imad

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Sex Slave (100) writes:

comments are just peoples opinion good or bad I still care for the comments so bring'em on

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

I feel very sorry for you if you are having problems of that sort all I can say is watch out for infection and stop... well expressed sadness i could relate or could have related long ago...give yourself time to heal hugs

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:

I refuse to say anything on this poem Danielle...except that your probably NOT gona like most of the comments you get on it.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, A Broken Soul (103) writes:

hey i know what it's like to cry for help, i've been here too many times... so if you need to talk or anything, even though i don't exactly know ya, feel free to aim me. ^Autumn^

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Sex Slave (100) writes:

If you like that one you should check out some of my other poems

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, SilentStalker (1324) writes:

...sorry bout that, Danny...he was being sarcastic...cutter poems are not held in the highest light here...I myself just don't understand it, but that's me...you may not get good marks with this one...

On Friday June 24th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

should a poem be judged on its subject matter alone? blah, i think not. true we enjoy what we relate to more, but difficult subjects do not a poem ruin.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:

wow, a cutter poem.. I needed that .. there's a need for those on DP

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