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Rain

Come and wash me clean

And purify my soul

Kill me in your fury

Kill me in your glory

Release me from my prison

Set me free and save my soul

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On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

I have been reading your work and I have to say, it's damn good

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

mm...yes, spiritual in an uplifting sense...finally...but without being flighty and alienating...I liked the 'kill me in your fury' line, too :)

On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

majestic spirituality, the way christianity used to be.

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:

Very spiritual in a sense... Kya

On Friday October 29th, 2004, whisperer (167) writes:

majestic is the word for this one...-]darkness[-

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I agree with darkness...it's majestic. "..Kill me in your glory..."

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