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Whats Underneath my Mask

I hide what is too hard to see

Seek shelter from the hate

I hide myself underneath a mask

Too scared to tell my secrets

Unable to show the pain

The scars I will hide

But the pain that will soon kill me

Will end all my suffering

And make the nightmares disappear

Rip away the mask and you will only find lies

But if you kill me you will only set me free.

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On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, mywristshurt (512) writes:

beautiful... amazing./.. now i know why i marked you as a fav.

On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (228) writes:

I agree with Lyneas and Kya. cant think of anything betterto say.

On Friday October 29th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

To live a lie is to live in hell, no?well written Danielle Kya

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

I like what you put a across here.. living a lie, lying so much to your that it becomes deep rooted, you lose the truth.. very good work, I wish I could haven written with this kind of fluency and emotional intelligence when I was your age.

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

have*

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

And also, the last line really was quite brilliant.

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, stormtalk (884) writes:

If it's too hard to see, then why are you hiding it? Are you a lie, then?

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

i really liked the way you ended this.. very nicely done...

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Sex Slave (98) writes:

thanx

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

The last line...was absolutely wonderful.

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