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She was me with somebody
Now the things she says let my blood
She sticks to it like oxygen or razorblades dragged through my veins
She taught me why roses are red
Because love is to bleed
To take a switch blade in your back but not to heart
So I bought her a white rose that day...
...And I slit my throat because she told me to
Because every crimson drop is love as is this on and off blacking out from bleeding...
...How thin my heart has become...
From bleaching the rose red with all of my resentment
I could kill her on paper and shed never know how the ink bled for her
I'd replace my life with "ou"
But id never tell her to her face I cared enough to
She’s too broken and in disbelief
So I promised to never lie to you
I'd never mean to hurt you if you let me close enough to
I promised id never let the stars hang over your lifeless body while you beautifully choke on aspirin and drown in the blood creeping slowly from your wrist
If "I love you" carries no meaning
Then I give you a gentlemen's promise




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On Thursday September 15th, 2005, Esau (285) writes:
i read this once before with a past account. still as great as the first time.


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, Bridge (325) writes:
wow...*echoes shards*


On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (757) writes:
Great write. Welcome to DP *knows you've been here for a few months* ~*~Tart~*~


On Friday March 11th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:
wow...this is so awesome i'm lost at words...


On Friday January 28th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (317) writes:
wow*** this was so amazingly beautiful. That doesn begin to explain it. It's enchanted me. You have great talent. ~*Kitty*~


On Friday November 12th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
beautiful prose laced with despair........so very well spoken.............urban


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
i'm getting so many different thoughts from this about several different people i have encountered in life. you did a great job


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
"i promised id never let the stars hang over your lifeless body while you beautifully choke" this definitely has a classic feel to it..like the start to an endless journey. the beginning of an end that is to far off to notice. awesome write.


On Friday November 5th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:
i really like this... but it's hard to follow in oplaces... like "she thought me"... but if you fix those bits, it'll be an awesome work. :) read it aloud. helps it flow.


On Friday October 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
awsome i love it razorblades are my favorite thing in this world i love poems that razerblaeds in thhem


On Friday October 29th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
The imagery is so cool.. very visual.. blood and razors.. ah.. some of my favorite things.. -Michael


On Thursday October 28th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
Damn, AGP. You have won my vote. This piece is just plain awesome. I fuckin love it. 'she thought me why roses are red, because love is to bleed' That line is great dude! You have earned a favorite, so you better upgrade soon.


On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
~ Rose.


On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
This is so wonderful. So untouchably beautiful that I am let only to be a speechless bystander; "if "i love you" carries no meaning then i give you a gentlemen's promise" - utter genius. I shall look forward to reading many more of your terrific works. ~


On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:
"i could kill her on paper and shed never know how the ink bled for her" i thought that was a great line, welcome to DP.


On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
"id replace my life with "ou"" very, very clever, wonderful.



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