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she

inspiration welled until
pure pores bled frail female youth
from a brow furrowed with a wild eyed will
to scream out her sex,
it beads and rolls tongue tip to gag reflex

pregnant with notions,
nausea natural
churns words, turns and
heaves freeverse birth in reverse
organic almost orgasm artwork
moaning 'she'into pens

ink drips on her virgin pages.

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On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Err0r (602) writes:

so i herd u liek vaginas? :O me 2 MOar womenz.

On Sunday May 6th, 2007, saintedmad (848) writes:

egads. .. i have found a new favourite; i am just in litanous love with this piece. ..reads like a milky.malicious mantra with all those loverly dripping allegories and alliterations. ..amen.....nessa

On Monday April 30th, 2007, Endifference (286) writes:

never got a buzz this big from writing. liked the words -END

On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, nightshade (79) writes:

the lurching motion of a storm tossed sea or possibly, contractions of muscles in the throes of agony. The motion of the poem is astounding.

On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, nightshade (79) writes:

wonderfully written the images convulsing in my mind made me want to cry and scream and moan in ecstasy all at the same time i really enjoyed readin a master of the language

On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1203) writes:

i see that i have been missing out on artistic talent, kudos, i will have to read more of you.

On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, carlosjackal (1548) writes:

This twisted and swirled around the tongue, then smacked me round the head with its fantastic langauge and imagery. Bloody brilliant!

On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, silent circus (404) writes:

k i totally had to read it again and i still dont know what to say about this fkin awesome piece----i love it, i truly do dude! ~*dani*~

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Cunnilinctus (1709) writes:

straight up I read it out loud twice.. i like the movement and the allegory.. i think the second and last lines first stanza and the last lines, rhythmically, seem to arch from the rest... gotta like the like the violation of pages with lust like force!

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Cunnilinctus (1709) writes:

is this givin birth... ya know, i'm far removed from all that meaning... but there was this phrase from Socrates... somethin about bein a midwife to windeggs... all i got.. more tekillya~!

On Friday March 9th, 2007, sIo (901) writes:

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On Friday March 9th, 2007, prettydisgrace (146) writes:

excellent! vert beautiful.

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Jonas (858) writes:

that was a magically sexual little bit of word craft

On Monday March 26th, 2007, Jonas (858) writes:

i'm here reading this again and am struck again by my opinion that it is simply excellent.

On Monday March 5th, 2007, Mab (1061) writes:

such poetry...your words convey so much. all hail!

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, jack paper (223) writes:

incredible *bows to K_C_D*

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, cucuio (219) writes:

damned it I can't think of what to say about it... Tounge twister for sure ( I was trying to read it out loud)but beautiful and winsome? hmmm... But certainly lovely ...bright in the pictures in my head.

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, elisa (1931) writes:

graphic and deep.... a passionate pulse of words... my favorite kind of poetry.

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, Imsosickxxx (98) writes:

WOW, just WOW!

On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, silent circus (404) writes:

wow, that is beautiful, so vivid, and may i say HOT....wow, i totally dug the ending.."ink drips on her virgin pages" ...poetry...beautiful ~*dani*~

On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, glasshouse (829) writes:

Allow me the hnor of being the first to comment. We both know this is beautiful. Its fragile. Breathtaking. Breath-giving, even. Its weaving images of life and solace and inspiration and its wonderfully written. As it always is. Well done. I love you. -Je

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