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I’m skin stretched taut on
Rims of fabled home and
Melancholy holly holiday
Skin stitched in and deeply pounded
booming, I’m a drum
punctuating our parades
and rolling in your presence
 and I whisper
it’s a symbol, with a cymbal
that when you tap me out like rain
I’m natural like a
Heart’s sound, now
I’m high and low, how drums go
You are my sticks my
Instruments and lead
Singing
Beautiful

It’s a seamless rhythm
In this melody, we are.
And our life flows on lyrics
I can finally hum along,

Whether you reverberate with
Steady bass,
or our notes pierce,
as sometimes they will,
the music is love.
What is more natural, than music?

And if a drum
Is how I’m in tune today
You have me
And I’ve you
Snared
and ever flowing more gorgeously



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On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, bloody LOVEly (107) writes:
good poems live on in the hearts of passionate people. a great way to start the day -with King Crazy Dave.


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, zanewill (111) writes:
this is twisted & contemplated on the realm of majesty/there is nothing more beautiful///say.waht?!.>>


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:
what is more natural than music? excellent piece..


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
Wow, you went pretty detailed with this piece didn't you. Nicely done. ][ ][


On Tuesday February 21st, 2006, Alanarchy (1681) writes:
Hell yeah. So many great lines, here. I'm just mesmorized, like a Jimmy Page solo. Just loved your metaphor in this one. This is the best I've read all night.


On Sunday January 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1872) writes:
i've never come across a more eloquently developed and meaningful extended metaphor....very nice, profound


On Sunday January 29th, 2006, desekr8or (22) writes:
Now this is some intensely eloquent shit! I feel eerie benevolence in your style. Do you still eat paint chips?


On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
very sweet dave... beautiful really


On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
...if there really was a drumbeat playing to this, the drummer would have a porno 80s moustache. He would be playing mega-porno slow silky rhythmic beats... the kind of beat that makes you want to get down and dirty or maybe take a shower (but not alone)


On Sunday January 15th, 2006, Tangle Box Tales (167) writes:
How to comment, how to comment ~ that seems to be the quandry of speaking. Wanting to say that something has personal meaning but also saying that the breaking waves are better than you think and work as a foreground for more. :) I'm glad to see this wor


On Sunday January 15th, 2006, Tangle Box Tales (167) writes:
I'm glad to see this work, and glad to read the underwritten letters that work specifically to target one's motion of heartbeats. Like a language built for two; it wears well.


On Friday January 13th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
"What is more natural, than music?" well one thing for sure is taht your poetry is more natural than any music ive heard. very nice


On Friday January 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
*applauds* Elegant and every line in touch with the next! Love always makes the best melodies. Just damn beautiful!


On Friday January 13th, 2006, An Expired Member (22) writes:
I play the drums...and this speaks volumes to me...love this peice...love the metaphores and the images...beautiful


On Thursday January 12th, 2006, sIo (883) writes:
this...is...i'm breathless.


On Thursday January 12th, 2006, Alec Pure (334) writes:
wow man this was really cool i liked the whole peice in general but the last two lines summed it all up nicley ~~gap1~~



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