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When it rains, its said, it pours
And when it does it does with
Cats its said, and dogs
So neck deep in wet noses
I値l laugh as a scratching post
and where痴 the
wolves, I値l ask, and tigers
and when it pours
I値l say
Its drizzle
for its fun for me to manage
because its how it goes
and how it goes , I know, is constant
and claws wont get me down
forever more evolving
concrete, I know, exists
but fluid痴 where I live
and ever am I grateful
to love it when it rains
and when I知 old, and damp, I値l stop
with an army of tigers
I値l laugh
And wolves




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On Saturday June 7th, 2008, carlosjackal (1699) writes:
=) This is a fantastic upper for when the odds feel stacked against you..Touch of the English :) Rock on, Dave!


On Friday May 11th, 2007, disc (80) writes:
Roll with the punches. I like how you capture the downs of life.


On Friday May 11th, 2007, disc (80) writes:
But, one must never lose hope.


On Friday January 6th, 2006, bloody LOVEly (107) writes:
hahaa, i love your mind.


On Friday December 9th, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
I really like how this was put together it kept my eyes focused on each word waiting to see where the next would lead until the end...just to see if there was a point


On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, Nightingale (555) writes:
I miss talking to you. you get my 1 comment for the year. ;-) because I like this work. and 'cause I miss you.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, Evil (549) writes:
yeah.. take it blow by blow.. life is so combustible.. spontaneously, really. you have me by the heart, dear. this was inspiring.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:
You're like...ScorpionHela...in male form...I hope you understand.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:
I really like the way this is written. The way you keep referring to the fact that it is SAID but not calling it truth. Finding your own truth and dealing with life. I like this a lot. Perfectly portrayed in perfect words and phrases. -Glass


On Monday November 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
very nice write, it enabled me to see 2 different perspectives. and i do enjoy variety


On Monday November 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:
It's like every poem I read here has a hidden message for each of to see as differently as we like. Thats why day and night go together for the better when you realize...exactly that.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, evolve (2293) writes:
um, what?


On Monday November 7th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
I loved the outlook of this...the words perfect, as always. Good write, Dave.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, evolve (2293) writes:
..to me, this write seriously just beamed a smirk and a cackle..thoroughly enjoyed..twisted itself into a mocking sort of sing-song..inspiring..rock on, Dave.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, vaultgrl (236) writes:
hehehe......"and when it pours i'll say it drizzles"......i love this entire write, but that line made me laugh and think a little too.....kinda like it's all in the eye of the beholder.....great write!.....



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