DarkPoetry -|- King_Crazy_Dave -|- knowing you, like clubbing seals.

knowing you, like clubbing seals.

I need a cage
I need
A class
On class or something

Or I will try to drink your
Mind
Find your seams and scream
Screams
In your library

To just know
How curves and folds
Fit lengths of bold
Blunt
and my motives sound like
sex scenes I know,

though

sometimes you chickens
need a cock

if I could make a living lifting legs
like a laced up hooker
I’d wrap my toes around stars
And crush them down into your drooling mouth

I cant though, so I map your cognition

Its painless,
I don’t let you feel it
I’m not malicious
Just fascinated.

I’m a hallway with locked doors
Swallowed keys
And a deck of cards.
You’ll never turn my tumblers
Or know if I hold the joker
Five of spades
Or a fist full of your brain

No compassion
Grinning wild and
Clubbing seals.

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On Friday April 25th, 2008, colorapathy (66) writes:

This.. this i enjoyed very much.

On Tuesday January 8th, 2008, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

got me from the very start. wry humor and unexpected images.

On Monday April 30th, 2007, Endifference (269) writes:

one gramm. error, fucking bit me in the ass the rest of the way. wicked write. -END

On Friday April 27th, 2007, capt_funguy (999) writes:

" ...scream screams - in your library " excellent .. violate your sanctuary .. an understated perfect example of your city slang that only you speak - you've an altered view that is fascinating .. excellent .. funguy

On Friday September 23rd, 2005, lostshadow (13) writes:

Very detailed piece I like it a lot you are a very talented writer i enjot reading your work

On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:

real smooth. i love the imagery and the entire concept of this. 6th stanza is exceptionally pleasing. .....-samone

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

fast, brilliant and smooth........well done...........urban

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

you are in a class of your own, dave. It's that "special" class they send those kids to who keep dribbling on themselves... even when they're in the ninth grade.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2144) writes:

Jesus Christ,man...organic poetry as it was meant to be enjoyed..."sometimes you chickens need a cock"...your writing is so "Fuck You"...I wish I had what you have.I can only pretend...and plot your assassination,of course...

On Monday September 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2144) writes:

...I do not belong being mentioned in the same sentence as you...and commenting on your writing...for me anyway...It's like pissing on the spot where they hung the cross for Jesus...my words are a desecration to yours.

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

ha, tim, that's fucking awesome. Tell me where that spot is so i can piss there too.

On Tuesday September 20th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

They are.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:

wow... this was very cool.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

.. "I’d wrap my toes around stars And crush them down into your drooling mouth"..

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

..Dave.. You're the hoarse tragic wails of a thousand sunsets.. sinking, fist raised, mind clear into a yellow body of pure brilliant ocean. Bathed and beautiful. At random you make up all the words. Sun. Moon and sky.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (58) writes:

wow... this poem is fucking amazing, although judging by the previous comments, you already know that :)

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Evil (542) writes:

you are a manipulator. almost genius. nice.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, sIo (891) writes:

magnificence.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

This felt like a swim in rancid dreams. You're so honest but still so mysterious. Its my favorite thing about your writing. Its disturbing sometimes, but always leaves me longing to know more. Great job, as always. -Glass

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Jazz Daffy (20) writes:

You are fucking amazing. The way your words carry on..... somehow, it makes me think of getting a job as a preschool teacher just to murder a bunch of toddlers. You rock.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:

its kind of like that. but i dont kill them. i just learn to predict everything they do.

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

tell me dave, did you predict i would do this? *t-bags dave in the face*

On Sunday October 16th, 2005, Jerrica (125) writes:

LMAO! Oh lord, I laughed out loud to that. But seriously, this is really good. Although you say it's about being able to predict one's acts; I felt this piece was very un-predictable (which I loved and think is a good thing) awsome write once again. *J*

On Monday September 19th, 2005, evolve (2229) writes:

..your fist is a little too big to fit in most mouths, Dave. :) I don't know whether to close my eyes and pretend I didn't read this or etch in it my mind.

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