DarkPoetry -|- King_Crazy_Dave -|- you, nothing.

you, nothing.

Bloody noses ,roses
Poses
Ready for the camera
Action,
Be them
With acute
Perfection, afflict
Inflict
Cosign constrict
Act in fact
React with tact
buttons stutter
Shudder, fool
Just flinch
One inch
And watch us hit you
Break your jaw
We love

Shallow

Tighter denim
Curves
Venom
slide, wrap those
limbs
around
we love, lust

more

push back your smile
you’ll never use it
in this world
cold
black
blink
now don’t,
die on me
you
piece of meat
you
nothing

we love, luster

shine for me
its all
you’re worth

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On Sunday July 17th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

you have an amazing grasp of rhythm Dave. It makes the words so much more tasty!

On Tuesday July 5th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

powerful, ouch... but at the same time... Psyched...

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Elise (267) writes:

Wow, nicely written..that ending Ouch, you sure know how to use words as a weapon throughout this.

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:

you are so talented!!!you are also very hott!; )- summer

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Valentine (509) writes:

Brilliant . . "shine for me its all you’re worth" . . these lines, perfect..

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, PaperPromises (77) writes:

Bitter and lovely.. -Cor

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Evil (542) writes:

this is definately crazy, mean poetry. you've got this thing, baby, and it makes me want you. =)

On Monday June 20th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:

I loved the flow of this...Brutal slap in the faceness...aaaand I'm saying what they said, so I'll shut up.

On Monday June 20th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:

How do you do that?

On Monday June 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (17) writes:

great write, it has a nice flow.

On Monday June 20th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

Brutal and rigid. The flow was superb as was the lingering power.

On Monday June 20th, 2005, sIo (892) writes:

damn, like snorting pine needles and lotion...lubricated pain laced with forced desire. awesome.

On Monday June 20th, 2005, suicideseason (2144) writes:

This is vicious and raw...the herky-jerky tone was a relentless whiplash nightmare...I can't get enough of writes of this magnitude.I should read more of you.

On Monday June 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:

shine for me its all your worth, i bet thats how hugh hefner thinks about his models

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