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umbrella society

Maybe, just,
                          Maybe I am
Undoubtedly the

Best

Find myself in every
Brilliant
Act of
God, and you pass
Me like I’m less than
A fly,
          A potato
But I am just true to my
Human self
I’m a pretentious
  Sexist , sex addicted
Display of racism

And I walk high on the sharp stilts
Piercing your umbrella city
Blocked bodies dwell
In the realm of gray black
And white
You shade out the sun
Run from the rain
And I’ll fall to show you who I am
And I’ll break it with your body

Tanned skin and
Damp clothes

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On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

this has a very take me as i am or fuck you feel..no apologies, i dig it...great write ~kristy

On Thursday March 15th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (349) writes:

Definately infused with an essence of humbling and unfaltered confession. The entire cake is icing, too f-in sweet you only need a little piece to soothe your sugar tooth. The picture you've drawn is complex and stunning, especially for such a short work.

On Saturday September 10th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (475) writes:

..and i'd be down there with an air rifle shooting slugs up your arse. *ping* take that! *ping* and that! :P

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Elise (270) writes:

*tosses destroyed umbrella into the trash* I'm so glad I'm stilt-proof ^_^ I like this, very creative David.

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Evil (551) writes:

wow... this is really good. you are amazing.. i really don't have the words to do this justice.. so i'll shut up.

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, PaperPromises (77) writes:

Your writings amaze me, brilliant concept, I love this. -Cor

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:

Alright it's time to make a comment. I've read this so many times and can't think of anything good to say. So in other words, I'm in just complete awe.

On Tuesday June 14th, 2005, bloody LOVEly (103) writes:

id take down my umbrella just in time to see your godly stilts come cracking down on my face +_+ this is just s0o good, but u kno that already?

On Tuesday June 14th, 2005, Rachel (392) writes:

I've always known you were Godly. ;)

On Monday June 13th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

Now I'm left wondering what it was like before you edited.

On Monday June 13th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (877) writes:

I liked it before you edited it, now I'm in awe...

On Monday June 13th, 2005, serotonin lost (225) writes:

i don't know what it is but something tell's me your a little more then just a potato, i am stunned by the intelligence behind your writting. please never stop.

On Monday June 13th, 2005, sIo (896) writes:

once again i'm in awe of your writing. it's like everytime i become more amazed and thrown back by your words. who would think of such unique things and ways to surround an idea with such magnificence. wonderful work, Dave.

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