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The memory is softly gritty
Like fog is to eyes
Staring blankly across my wooden floor
Sucking inspiration out of (her)
Anything, really
The etched flower patterns on a bowl
In the corner
Of, what might as well be soul, mine.
But the summer was sweet, (like once was someone I knew)
Warm air off cooling asphalt, making my curtains dance
Such a simple dance (really just a step or two)
So inane a memory, why is it so dear
(why is everything, in here)
such a pretty girl, never felt so good alone
on a gorgeous night, satisfied at home
for once

bastards in their beds with bullets in their heads
that’s how I sang myself to sleep
too crushed to feel sad , I had ground my concrete heart
to dust
I was warm again, if only for a second.
a whole new way to be sad undone,
undone to no one who was anyone.
To you.
Those who saw me die but thought it was art.
To you, nobody.




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On Thursday July 26th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:
I LOVE This, It Is Broken But Beautiful


On Wednesday February 8th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (276) writes:
mmmmmmmmmm....that was fantastic. ~lauren~


On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (109) writes:
You are very good with words I must say...


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (318) writes:
.. I haven't read this, and I'm not sure why. I want to quote it all... "undone to no one who was anyone." I've felt like you've stolen my words and shattered me with a look.


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (318) writes:
.. Just one simple look that means nothing to anyone.. But me. I've taken it personal, pray you don't mind. I disagree with Liz.


On Sunday June 5th, 2005, evolve (2296) writes:
Indifference loves you for being its friend. Be kind. You always shove my heart back into my throat. I don't mind as long as you don't care.


On Saturday April 30th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:
I really didn't like it. You're usually so stylized and strong, while this felt meandering. I agree the second stanza is better, and there are some beautiful little pieces and references, but overall I wasn't crazy about it.


On Thursday April 28th, 2005, swing_the_hammer (74) writes:
dang. i think i'm in love with you. (oops, did i just type that?)


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
It's beautiful...your imagery is amazing as it ever was.


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Sharon Rose (662) writes:
*affects a deep base* "nobody knows, the troubles I've seen...."


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Medusas Child (1613) writes:
i really felt this, the contrast, too look back from grey times to past summers, in a way. then the second verse just comes collapsing down from calm yet desparing recollection.a complete cave in


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
...this was amazing and im still trying to get the weight of the last stanza off my heart..~kristy


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, hate_doll (328) writes:
"bastards in their beds with bullets in their heads/that's how I sang myself to sleep" wonderful. meaningful symbols and very intriguing. also, the second to last time was exquisite


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
*is moved*.... very intigueing(spell check that).... i like the works you write, bout time you let us share a piece of your mind again... nice write



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