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Manipulate

I’ll part your skin
Seep inside, grip
Lungs,
I’ll breathe your oxygen
Squeeze out your,
Parts.
Cough, let your flesh
Kiss me.
And I’m sorry,
Cause I have you
I will have you.

At my, feet.
Not to lift you,

And I’d love to,
But I have no, will
So forget about me
Cause I will have you,
Grip, heart,
I’ll breathe your kindness.

All you are,

Isn’t
Anymore.

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On Saturday May 26th, 2007, An Expired Member (12) writes:

i.....just.....wow this is good i like this its....dang i cant even explain it GREAT job really great

On Monday July 25th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

this was suffocating, i like how you've structured this...hyperventilating. ~michelle

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, Liz (406) writes:

The commas are messing with me; I'm having a hard time reading it smoothly. Concept is executed with strength and originality.

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

wow good job

On Monday December 27th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

superb work,felt a bit like lyrics,takes you right into it,great concept and orginality in your writing of that

On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

great write from beginning to end.

On Monday December 27th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:

you already know what I think of this, because you said it in every word you wrote...

On Monday December 27th, 2004, Drifter (359) writes:

Nice work, like the ending.

On Monday December 27th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

intense, and the ending was great. . I really liked this a lot.. . a lot of truth in these words, and the honesty makes it really beautiful . nice work

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, Drea (934) writes:

The title says it all. This was honest and dark. This kept my attention from beginning to end. Killer write, Dave.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

Very fire crackery dave .. a burst of splendidness - here, have my wallet. [D&A]

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, Astra Dei (644) writes:

really dark and twisted. im totally in to this piece. awsome ending

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

That was beautiful! *agrees with suicide* -JiNx(ie)

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

Awesome piece.Gripping and intense.The ending is killer.

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