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"thanks." by King_Crazy_Dave

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I thank the phone that rings when
I’d like it to
And the voice on the lines end
Whoever it is
And whatever they say , its not important
The fur of my best friend, as he wags and lights up
When I’m around
Even when I don’t need that
My ears for hearing, music
Any music, any
Friends, always pulling out the knives
You put there in the first place,
You have my deepest regard. Almost.
And the sun’s rays.
The cool wood floors that hold me
Even if I’m doing something
Undesirable.
And desire, driving my growth and my
Demise
I’d like to wryly smile, and thank all the ugly things
That make me feel, oh so
Beautiful.
And love, it is why I live
Say what you
Will
And I know you will
About
Love
I love it.
Lies that make the truth sweeter
Myself, for knowing to thank these things
Every day, not,
Just this one.
And this day, for giving one more reason
To piss and moan
About the things, I thank
To thank myself
For being better.
Finally, change
For keeping us
Aware.



>we killed the native americans. doesnt mean i cant thank something.



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On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Err0r (581) writes:
so I herd u liek thanksgiving? :O Rock those turkeys.


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
Dave... you know how I feel about this one... but I felt the need to comment nonetheless. I could quote every single line and tell you how they all tugged my heart...


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
I could write a million adjectives describing this piece and your talent but... setting aside all things superficial... this piece affected me. And thats what hits me hardest.


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
Rarely do you find a piece that HONESTLY changes how you feel or what you think and you've done that for me with this piece. Simply amazing. *hugz* -Glass


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, WhoIAM (35) writes:
great poem.


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, sIo (893) writes:
you live for love...


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Jane (59) writes:
"Friends, always pulling out the knives You put there in the first place, You have my deepest regard. Almost." Holy hell Dave. You're so fucking amazing. It blows my mind.


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Jane (59) writes:
"I’d like to wryly smile, and thank all the ugly things That make me feel, oh so Beautiful." This is THE greatest line ever.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Demosthenes (222) writes:
*smiles* its so happy when youre happy. you make me smile. again. in addition to that first one. i just might memorizethis for school (with your permission of course). -B


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (860) writes:
well said.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
very... Thanksgivingy-like


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:
awesome write.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:
Wow Very intense write... nicely done.. -JiNx(ie)


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
great write.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Six-Out (1827) writes:
You forgot to thank me for something, bitch. I guess this could be seen as good though. ;)


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
Just this one".. lovely work ..-calamity-


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
i'm not sure of exactly what this made me feel, appreciation in the beginning but then I dunno.. a change.. great write dave, I liked the ending as well.."Lies that make the truth sweeter Myself, for knowing to thank these things Every day, not, Jus



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